Feedback from pupils on our opening sequence

The feedback we got back was a big help to us, people said our editing was good which is a great relief as we thought it wasn't that good, it's good to get an insight on peoples opinions so we can make any needed changes to our sequence, a criticism we got is louder vocals which everyone seems to agree on, the setting we choose had a lot of background noise and it can be hard to the camera to pick out our vocals, we will take this issue on board and make sound vocals to add onto our opening sequence, our shots seemed to be good so we're pleased with that , the ending we thought was good and it's nice to hear that our peers enjoyed it.